Driving
To nowhere
The road stretches
Pointing
I stop the car
And step outside
I begin walking
A random field
Waterlogged
And muddy
I persevere
Feet sinking deeper
Hours pass
A random direction
I stop walking
Horizon not obtained
Driving
To nowhere
The road stretches
Pointing
I stop the car
And step outside
I begin walking
A random field
Waterlogged
And muddy
I persevere
Feet sinking deeper
Hours pass
A random direction
I stop walking
Horizon not obtained
[...] Horizon not obtained; a short ‘road poem’ [...]
should perhaps be INTANGIBLE HORIZON
(or Horizon Unreached, or…?)
I’m afraid not: it should be Horizon not obtained. In my own poems I choose my words with some care, there is a reason why it is ‘not obtained’.